Adding to my script

My film still does not meet the required 2 minutes of footage, therefore I have developed some ideas that will add more footage to the film:

I will add some shots of a board with a map, pictures and other information about Rebecca and Nash, I have decided to have a static shot (3s) to show the overall board and a panning shot which shows more detail about what is included on the board (4s).






I will also add a mid shot of another agent in HQ running through a door and telling Mya that the main agent is in trouble 'Agent 362's cover has been blown, she's been targeted by the enemy and the information is at risk' (5s)




 

Film upate- Draft 4

Today I have uploaded the fourth draft for my media film, I think that I have improved in most of the areas for development that the teacher has suggested to me, however I need to improve my sound as it is still very choppy and not refined.

Film update- draft 3

On Friday I uploaded my new footage to the computer, edited it, the sound and the titles and uploaded the third draft to Youtube.

Revising my script

I have added some more lines to my script which provides more information about what is happening in my film and why the character is being chased.

A woman is running down a dark alley way.

She comes to an abrupt stop at a fork in her path, looks to her left and right while holding a phone to her ear.

Agent (Urgently)

This is agent 362, requesting immediate back up, cover has been blown and I’m being followed by a rival agent, the mission is compromised.

 I’m sending you my coordinates now, the information is acquired but I could be captured at any moment.

(Typed on screen code font, black and white)

Proceed to safe house, meet with agent 624, go underground and await further orders.

(I have found a tutorial about inverting the colours of a clip on iMovie which means that I will film the scene normally and invert the clip during editing) 

I am also hoping to film some extra footage of someone typing the above sentence on a computer screen, therefore I have been doing some research into the fonts normally used for coding, which are:

Courier

Andale Mono

Figure 3 Monaco

Proggy

Teacher feed back + re-scheduling

Earlier this week I gathered a group of students together to ask them what they thought about the draft of my production, after showing them the film, I asked them to write down things they liked about the film, things they thought could be improved and how I could improve them. As you can see below I have compiled a table of their thoughts and have used their feedback to make another schedule for the next few weeks.

I have also received feedback about my film from my teacher which I will also take into consideration when adjusting my film, the elements of my film i need to change are:

• the rain on the lens during an establishing shot
• a sudden switch in music at 0:30
• the titles 'writer' 'kevin' are not conventional 
• back to back b-roll pans of scenery take away from pace of narrative  
• sequencing of keyboard needs to be during/ after dialogue