Film upate- Draft 4

Today I have uploaded the fourth draft for my media film, I think that I have improved in most of the areas for development that the teacher has suggested to me, however I need to improve my sound as it is still very choppy and not refined.

Teacher feedback from my third draft

My third draft has been reviewed by my teacher, and I have been given some feedback and things that need to be improved:

• change shaky shot at 0:15 
• change font at beginning of the film as it is different from the font of the other texts
• cut shot of running with people, as it slows down the narrative of the film
• fit sound with visual more effectively make film more dramatic
• move fountain shot at 1:15 as it slows down narrative
• change titles at 1:06 and other ones that appear on black screen as they make the production look very low budget

Filming update

This weekend I have filmed more footage in Rotherham that I can add to my film to bring the overall film up to a run time of 2 minutes. I have edited the footage and synced the sound today and I will meet with my teacher tomorrow to get feed back on my latest draft and make anymore recommended changes.

Film update- draft 3

On Friday I uploaded my new footage to the computer, edited it, the sound and the titles and uploaded the third draft to Youtube.

Week schedule

Earlier in the week I created this schedule for the week ahead, so far, despite some technical issues I am keeping up with my schedule. I have also discovered some computers that have not been updated, this means that I am able to edit my video in the older versions of iMovie and Garageband which I started in.

Production update

Today I have experienced some difficulties while trying to edit my film, as the schools technicians have updated the Apple products that are available in school, this means that when I try to open my video on iMovie, or my sound on Garageband the computer cannot find my files and I cannot edit them. However I have discussed these setbacks with the technicians

Reflecting on my second draft

I have created a Prezi about the feedback I have received and what I will do to  improve my film.
https://prezi.com/svtuzy0jwi3q/draft-2-reflection/